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ON WRITING

It is the student’s responsibility to acquire the grammatical skills necessary to succeed in a writing class.

 Evaluating focus, content & organization:

Focus:

1- What do I hope to accomplish in this essay? How clearly have I defined my controlling purpose? How have I communicated this controlling purpose?

2- is my essay appropriate? How does it fulfill the assignment’s requirements if it is an academic essay?

3- Have I tried to do too much in the essay? Or are my goals too limited and inconsequent?

4- does my essay consider my readers’ needs, interests, and expectations? How does the essay respond to them? 

Content:

1- how does my essay develop or support my controlling purpose? How does it fulfill the commitment stated or implied by the controlling purpose?

2- what supporting details or evidence have I provided for my most essential generalizations? Are these supporting details and evidence adequate? Do they relate clearly to my controlling purpose each other?

3- what details, evidence, or counterarguments might strengthen my essay?

4- have I included any materials irrelevant to my controlling purpose?

Organization:

1- What overall organizational strategy does my essay follow?

2- Have I tested the effectiveness of this strategy by outlining or summarizing my essay?

3- to what extent does the organization of my essay flow logically from the commitment established by my controlling purpose?

4- will my organization make sense to my readers and be easy for them to follow?

5- to what extent does my essay follow the general conventions appropriate for this kind of writing?

6- could my introduction and conclusion be more effectively open and close my essay?

 After all the above, consider grammar, spelling, word choice, sentence structure, etc.

Consider the following:

Please read the following paragraph and notice the writer’s attempt to make his point as straightforward as possible to the readers.

The Hazards of Going to the Movies 

“Although I love movies, going to see them drives me crazy.  First, getting to the movie can take a lot of time.  I have a thirty-five-minute drive down a congested highway.  Then, with a popular film, I usually have to wait in a long line at the ticket window.  Another problem is that the theatre is seldom a pleasant place to be.  A musty smell suggests that there has been no fresh air in the theater since it was built.  Half the seats seem to be falling apart.  And the floor often has a sticky coating that gets on your shoes.  The worst problem of all is some of the other moviegoers.  Kids run up and down the aisle.  Teenagers laugh and shout at the screen. People of all ages loudly drop soda cups and popcorn tubs, cough and burp, and elbow you out of the armrest on either side of your seat.  All in all, I would rather stay home and wait for the latest movie hits to appear on TV in the safety and comfort of my own living room.”

 Considering the above paragraph, we may notice that the writer’s point of disliking going to the movies is backed up with specific reasons and details. The evidence and supporting details here provide the reader with a basis for understanding why the writer thinks and feels like he does.

 Now, try this:

On a separate paper, write the point the writer is making in the paragraph above. Then, under the point, write the three supporting evidence he provided.  Under each supporting idea, write the details he mentioned.

 Note that the point in a paragraph is usually referred to as a topic sentence.  A topic sentence includes the main idea of a paragraph.  Although a topic sentence may be at the beginning, middle or end of a paragraph, we will try to always write it at the beginning of the paragraph.

Activity:

Think of things that you like or dislike or think of some opinions that you have.  Write a strong sentence indicating one thing you like or dislike or have an opinion about. Then, think of at least three reasons why you like or dislike that thing or why your opinion is as such.  Then, think of details that support each reason.

 For example,

Idea:    Going to Disneyland

Feeling:  Dislike

Sentence:  Disneyland is one of my least favourite places to visit.

Support:

1- Disneyland is expensive

2- waiting in long lines

3- terrible food and drinks 

Details:

1- Disneyland is expensive    

A- admission is more than $30.00    

B- food and drinks are too expensive

C- souvenirs are too expensive 

2- waiting in long lines  

A- waiting in lines to get tickets    

B- waiting in lines to get on rides    

C- waiting in lines to buy food or drinks

3- terrible food    

A- very few choices    

B- food is stale    

C- drinks are tasteless